the cloud cover hasn't burned off grey skies, almost eerie white in the distance blanketing us in the dead heat of july no one else is out. i've never seen this suburban town look more like a desert. there were plans to have a bonfire, but it's too hot already; the friction between you and me makes it hard not to suffocate but no one's going to run the air conditioning. waiting for the clouds to burn off, the people to come back, and for you and me to be okay again.
I hope you enjoyed this poem! I cannot believe it’s already July– time is flying! Please let me know if you have any feedback on this piece or any writing challenges you’d like me to try out in the near future. Stay safe and healthy out there.
Brooke
Hey Brooke! Great job on this poem. It really captures the spirit of Summer 2020. I like how you diverged from the pattern at an end, it really gave a punch to your words. If you ever want, it would be an honor to feature some of your poetry at Radiate Literary or do a collaboration-type thing.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. That would be awesome– I’ll definitely check Radiate Literary out. 🙂
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