You Were In My Dream Last Night – Poem by Me

I saw you last night, and not on my laptop screen
Outstretched fingertips to make sure it was real,

that you were real-- I now know that it wasn't.
Who says we can't make it a reality? Come 

past the cloudy swirls of my consciousness 
and be with me before my eyes, surprise me as

I wake and let the dream be true. If I don't see
you here, I'll meet you in the clouds again.
I hope you enjoyed this piece! I've been having a lot of weird dreams lately so you'll probably see a couple more dream pieces in the next week or so on here. If only I could remember more about my dreams...maybe I should start a dream journal. Please let me know if you have any feedback or writing challenges. Stay safe and healthy out there.

Brooke

Which Box Are You In? – Poem by Me

If you know me, you know how I like to put
things into boxes. It's hard to place which box
you belong in. You're too colorful, too surprising
for me to sort you just yet.

Each box on my desk calendar filled in with tiny
handwriting, each box in my closet packing away
memories that deserve to be kept but belong 
in the past, each box reveals something.
Except you.

I hope you enjoyed this piece! Admittedly, I’m one of those obsessive organizers who has to file every piece of information in my brain and constantly keep my room tidy, so this was a natural thing to write about. Please feel free to share feedback and writing challenges in the comments. Stay safe and healthy out there.

Brooke

Empty Rooms – Poem by Me

I like emptiness until you leave. Look at this room,
a blank canvas, space for us to make our own. 
The light bounces off the white walls and your smile,
our voices echo through the halls, large shadows
of our own laughter. Let this emptiness be hope, 
promise, a starting point. I can't walk into an empty
room with you and be sad anymore. Even walking
away is only a reminder there's something better 
for us in the works, and we'll find it, together. 

I hope you enjoyed this piece! I don’t understand how so many of the poems I write end up about relationships or at least appear to be about relationships when I’m not in one. The inspiration for this piece was not romantic at all– I started off with the image of our house being emptier now that my grandma’s moved out. Clearly my subconscious is up to something! Please feel free to share feedback and writing challenges in the comments. Stay safe and healthy out there.

Brooke

Ode to My Biggest Hater – Poem by Me

Who knows where I would be without your
presence, your advice, your cut-downs, your
insults?

Now I am strong, I stand tall, and I wait for 
better things to find me, the pull of sunshine
into my orbit. You have made me shape myself

into who I am, so 
                                thank you.

Your unsolicited service will not be forgotten,
never erased from the corners of my crinkly brain,
even when it's old and shriveled.

There is too much to say, and yet not the right words
to say it, so 
                    thank you.

I hope you enjoyed this piece! It felt really liberating to write, especially since the person that inspired this poem was on my mind and I needed to channel some positive energy. I encourage you all to write a similar poem if you’re feeling upset about a person that brings negativity into your life. Please feel free to share feedback and writing challenges in the comments. Stay safe and healthy.

Brooke

Let’s Talk: Writing About Coronavirus

Hello everyone!

Today I wanted to discuss my thoughts on writing about coronavirus. It makes sense to write about things that affect you and you have personal experience with, which means a lot of writing about coronavirus is happening right now. I’ve written a couple pieces about it myself on this blog that you may have seen. I’m not saying it’s a good or bad thing– no writing topic is simply good or bad. If you want to hear the rest of my thoughts on this hot topic translating into your writing, keep on reading.

As I already briefly mentioned, I think it’s so important that we see pieces that reflect the crazy times we’re in now! However, I know that for me personally, it’s really hard to put my own personal twist on this topic. I’ve been very careful about social distancing and there’s only so many things I can write about being stuck in my house.

I’m also lucky enough to not know anyone personally who’s had the virus yet or particularly suffered from having the virus– my family members and friends are thankfully safe. I don’t have a personal experience to write about in this area, and I’m not in a place where I want to find one.

I’ve come to the point where I want to write about anything else as an escape from reality and a reminder of different, happier times. If you’re at that point too, that’s not a bad thing either. Write about whatever comforts you and gets you through living in these times.

Conversely, if you need to write about COVID-19 and related things to cope with the situation and get those feelings out on the page, of course do that! Besides, who am I to tell you what to write anyway? 🙂 As we’re all probably familiar with, writing is just another form of freedom of expression that makes our lives more bearable.

As with any topic you plan to write about, write your truth, and write it your way. I have enjoyed hearing about other people’s perspectives on this situation– the bad, the good, all of it together. This is definitely a strange time that needs to be documented, and there’s plenty of free time to sit down and document it. Similarly, there’s plenty of free time to read about it and keep up with the news.

There’s also so much going on in our world right now that’s not directly related to COVID-19. 2020 has been an absolute rollercoaster, and the political climate is intense right now in the USA because of the upcoming election. You can write about these topics if you want without mentioning COVID-19 at all, and they’re just as relevant!

I hope this was sparked some inspiration or other thoughts for you all! I just wanted to have a sort of reminder that this is a great time to write, whether it’s about what’s going on in the world or not. Please feel free to leave your thoughts on this in the comments. Stay safe and healthy out there!

Brooke

Afternoon Slump – Poem by Me

3 o'clock on a summer Sunday, the sky is blue and the palm
trees are swaying ever so nicely, waving from a distance

the sun shines brighter, daring us to be tired when it's so 
beautiful out. but the air is thick, and I know there's more to

a day than how it looks outside. wet hair after swimming 
dries stiff and sticky, and bugs swarm around the door,

buzzing through the holes worn into the screen by too many
summer days just like this one. the sandwich from an early

lunch is digested, and the stomach begins to think about 
what's next

I hope you enjoyed this short little piece! It was a fun one to write — it definitely sums up how I feel about the afternoon, especially during summertime. It’s a slump, but there’s some beauty in it nonetheless. Please feel free to share feedback and writing challenges in the comments. Stay safe and healthy out there.

Brooke

Marked Pages – Poem by Me

I've never met a book I didn't like
because I've always seen the bad with
the good. You taught me how to see
both.

And I don't mark the pages up, 
because I want to rely on my mind
and what I remember. I'll come back
to their yellowed corners again and

again, but I want to see clean, blank
margins. If the page stays unmarked,
we can pretend it's brand new. 
Pretend that we're brand new, at the 

beginnings of our journeys and 
discovering new books.

I hope you enjoyed this piece! I wrote it after thinking about different people’s preferences with their books. As you can guess from this poem, I don’t annotate my books except in school. My mom, however, has her favorite books all marked up with sticky notes and annotations, and I know lots of other people do the same. Please feel free to leave feedback and/or writing challenges in the comments.

Brooke

Are You There? – Poem by Me

I'm waiting for you here, in front of our 
favorite place to get sandwiches in the city.

Waiting for you, waiting for someone else 
maybe, waiting for something to come my

way, brush me on the shoulder, whisper
in my ear and sweep me away. Because I

can't (and won't) do it on my own, not today.
Turkey and pickle-- yes, just that and mustard,

please. I'll be waiting as I sit and eat this at a
table for two. I know you'll come eventually.

You're across the street by now, you must be.
I could text you, or call to make sure, but we

decided to be more independent, right? Yes,
no one should be so codependent this early.

I'll keep waiting here, for you.

This was something different to write. It’s not based off of my experiences at all, more so something I just got inspired to write. It’s funny how much I write about relationships considering my lack of experience with them. Please feel free to share feedback and/or writing challenges in the comments. Stay safe and healthy out there.

Brooke

Let’s Talk: Unfinished Pieces and Revising Your Writing

Welcome back everyone!

Today I want to talk a little bit about leaving writing pieces unfinished and revising your writing. These are two things I’ve struggled with a lot in the past (and still do!) so I thought it might be relevant to others as well. I also recently learned a lot about revision through my time in the Sewanee Young Writers’ Conference. If you’re interested in learning more about my experience with these two issues, keep on reading!

I often have an idea for a poem or short story (or even novel if I’m feeling ambitious) that I will start to run with, get stuck, and just kind of leave there. There’s nothing wrong with this, and a lot of great lines or portions of pieces can come out of just putting pen to paper when you have an idea. However, it can be difficult to shape these half-pieces into something you like or something that’s actually meaningful.

In a way, I think having that time away from the piece is really important to preventing writer’s block. However, you want to make sure you don’t take too much time away from the piece to the point where you forget what you were actually thinking about or trying to say when you wrote it. Also, try to spend your time mulling over possible directions to take it once you come back and work on it again.

If you end up just abandoning a piece completely, that’s completely normal and totally fine. I just recommend looking it back over to see if there’s any sentences/lines or whole excerpts you think could be useful for other pieces you’re currently working on or something you might want to write in the future.

I always feel like I’m missing out on something or losing something if I don’t see a piece out to its end, but it’s important to refrain from pressuring yourself. You most likely won’t be happy with what you write if you’re putting pressure on yourself anyways. If a piece isn’t working for you, listen to your inner writing voice and don’t worry about leaving it behind. Like I already mentioned, you can always come back to it later if you’re inspired to do so.

As far as revision goes, I had no clue how to actually revise my work in an effective way until learning more about that in my writing workshop. I would always use spellcheck and edit my grammar as well as sometimes tweak a few words for the sake of diction, but I never knew how to really dig deep and take a piece further.

In the workshop, I learned it’s normal to go through tons of drafts in the revision process, and generate lots of new lines and content to see what sticks. It might take a few drafts to figure out what you’re really trying to say and what made you decide to start your piece. Sometimes we’re not ready to put that into words yet, and that’s when you might find it beneficial to step away from the piece a little bit.

These are just a couple things I learned as a result of my writing workshop and my personal experiences lately, but I hope they prove helpful to you as well. Let me know if you have any questions, and please feel free to leave feedback and/or post requests in the comments. Stay safe and healthy out there.

Brooke

Walking On A Thursday Night – Poem by Me

it's seven o'clock and the sun won't set until eight.
we're walking through this park, past the unmowed
grass and i wish we were in a city on the busy sidewalks
instead. don't you ever wish for something bigger?

I wish you didn't think I'm selfish for wanting more.
let's move to the city or the country, anything but this
suburban purgatory. I know you can be yourself anywhere,
but I can't be myself here.

I walk faster than you, trying not to be noticed. your easy
stroll is so different than my fast-walk, almost broken into
a jog. we pass families, kids on bikes, couples having picnics
on ratty beach towels, but we are just here, walking.

I hope you liked this little piece! I get so much inspiration from the nightly walks I go on, and today’s piece is one of those small bouts of inspiration. Please feel free to leave feedback and/or writing challenges in the comments. Stay safe and healthy out there.

Brooke